All Comments on 'Two Sides of the Coin - The Play'

some writer are dumb as a bag of rocks.wife neck is red as fire from another man fucking.and hubby go down on her whore of a cunt.blow my mind the dumb shit that wrote for no common sense.

Dump the wife and strike out on a new life.

Your MC is displayed as being really dim not to notice his wife's obvious cheating...perhaps that will be explained in part two.....er...there is a part two coming?

Well, that was horrible.

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When your plot requires your POV character to be a blithering idiot sometimes and normal others, your story has serious issues. If the ending was implying a sequel, please rethink that decision.

1. Make your MC so GODDAMN STUPID that nobody will be able to sympathize with him, on any level. 'Can't root for a moron - it's simply impossible.

2. Make any single character you've created thoroughly unlikable. With no one to like, there's no way you can like the story itself.

You've managed to make those two facts a reality here, bobstales... Good job?

Please let this story die. And try harder, next time.

I see you had an eight year hiatus, as bad as this is you should have simply stayed away for good.

A big fat 1*

You jeks with your stupid comments are probably small dicked cucks trying to act tough. Take an account and wrote something if you are so good at it? All you do is bitch at evry writer about this or that. A pussy fart is more valid than your comment

I thought it was interesting.

Rob is a weakling. Hw knows what is going on with his wife. Time to kick her ass out and find a better woman.

If you're trying to agitate the btb fanatics, then you're doing a good job. You have to realize though that this could result to raising their blood pressure that could potentially lead to a more serious problem on their health. Keep up the good work and may your kind grow even more to keep the balance stable here in Literotica.

This was supposed to be a story about a disintegrating marriage. Based on the description it appears there hadn't been a marriage for years, and maybe never was one. But given how weak, timid, shallow, and clueless the supposed husband acted, maybe the cheating wife just wanted a man with a brain and a pulse.

Since the focus of the story was the feckless husband and his acting hobby, the marriage life was just an embarrassing backdrop, illustrating this guys failure or disinterest as a husband, but mostly as a man. It begs the question of why this poltroon didn't just sit the wife down and discuss the property settlement, or confront the dissolving marriage as soon as the first hints were revealed. Except that we already know the answer to the question: no balls and no brains.

Do you get your character concepts for cucked husbands and whore wives from Richard Gerald?

Thanks anyway. I'm sure you gave it your best effort.

I think everyone has already said it. So all I can say is it’s not worth a read don’t waste your precious time . On this one everyone has summed it up poorly written and just more cuckold crap which no one is really interested in . Just dumped in the loving wife category to get attention that’s all .

just part 1?

i think loveless wife should be in the tag section. for a lot of stories anyway

He knows shez got a load in her cunt, so could a drunk wife be able to force him to taste her manwhores juice... think not

surely he is not stupid to think his whore wife is faithful why didn't he give hell when she bitched about him marking her and why would he eat her knowing someone else had already made a deposit in her time to get rid of the slut other wise not much of a story

hope there is more! you can't leave us hanging!

I liked it. So, sue me. Where's part 2?

Your comment was better than the story and all the other comments put together! Rock on witcho bad-self!

Ha ha ha.... You made my day!!!

Nobody past the age of consent is that damn clueless.

Sometimes I read the comments first. Didn’t this time. Big mistake. So bad.

The word you’ve misspelled/misused repeatedly should be “conscience” not “conscious”. Story is just okay.

Yet Another three-minute story compressed into twenty.

I noticed the hickeys... and thought fuck it, I'm going to sleep.

She then has the balls to accuse him of it and talks about him raping her, even in jest, even without the rape comment, that deserves some sort of come back.

We get a bunch of internal dialogue but nothing suggesting he has any suspicions or concerns.

Shame Johann is too... no clothes, in the dark, get your genitals touching... damn that was good simulation.

Do we see the other side of the coin, the wife's story?

Do we see the aftermath of it all?

Or do we wait 8 years for them?

Most of these critiques are not founded on anything other than opinion. First of all, the wife is not the point of the story. His character isn’t ignorant, he’s in denial. He k iws she’s cheating, he just isn’t accepting it. Humans do that stuff all the time in real life...we ignore signs, etc.

Also, telling a writer what his or her story is about is like telling an engineer what drafts and blue prints should look like. The author determines the meaning, not the reader. For instance, the comment talking about how this story is supposed to be about a disintegrating marriage, is pointless and wrong. That’s not the part of the story that the writer wanted to focus on. This story....is a slice of life, about an experience this character had. That’s an asinine critique....that’s like saying “Ghostbusters should be told from the mayors perspective and not the Ghostbusters”.

Third, these stories are free and they are there to help you jerk off. They are for fun. So critics...go back to your mom’s basement and don’t come out ok? Go back down there, and sit in your tighty-whiteys, and beat off to anime girls.

I enjoyed the story because I understand it, so kudos to the writer.

Hard to stay awake reading this.

Another piece of rubbish from the Planet Stupid

Excellent comment. So true in many cases concerning comments here.

5/5 for the comment and 5/5 for the story.

Well what happened to him and his wife?.Without that information this is a nothing story.

My only comment to this decent story is that it isn't finished. He must know his wife is cheating. Maybe he just doesn't care. If so just seek a divorce and move on. Maybe it's his lack of caring that has led to her actions? Another chapter would be appreciated.

I agree with the majority!.It's lacking without an ending!..I still enjoyed it 5 Stars ★ ★ ★ ★ ★

What’s with ignoring the hickeys all over his wife’s neck? Even if he felt guilty over the rehearsal, the next morning was different: she accused him of rape. That’s at *least* worth pointing out that she had them from GNO activities, if not a direct accusation.

No man with the self control to avoid taking advantage of Mara after the private rehearsal, noticing his wife’s change in taste, could be that blind or that stupid.

Other than that, the story isn’t finished. That ending stunk, and not even an epilogue. FTDS!

Interesting slant on cheating and cuckolding but left unfinished

ending?

That truly sucked.