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Anonymousabout 12 years agoWhat happens?
What happens to the guys? How can the octopus thing insert itself into males?
katye43about 12 years agoWhat happened...
in Detail. Need to expand on her feelings and fears (although felt through a fog). What was the purpose or the octopus.. Good start. Just need more embelishment.
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