All Comments on 'Two Tickets To Paradise'

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katye43katye43about 12 years ago
What happened...

in Detail. Need to expand on her feelings and fears (although felt through a fog). What was the purpose or the octopus.. Good start. Just need more embelishment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
What happens?

What happens to the guys? How can the octopus thing insert itself into males?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Group 1

I want to know more about what group 1 is doing to prepare

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