All Comments on 'Two-time Dallas'

Sorry for forgetting several grammar errors in there, especially with the pronouns. Unfortunate and annoying. I hope it didn't ruin your reading experience completely.

I feel there could be a 2nd part to this story. I could see some romance between these two characters. I always enjoy a love story with hot sex throughout the story. I feel Dallas could show some vulnerability with her feelings towards Mitch while still being the dominating partner of course. I also enjoy the dog/underdog type relationship where the Mitch type character somehow wins the affection of a very beautiful person that’s way out of his league. I really enjoyed this story, your writing is somewhat addictive, I loved your most recent story in the LW section, so keep writing and I’ll keep reading (maybe

Two-Time Dallas part 2 in the future).

Thank you ghost-reader for indulging me.

Don’t worry about the spelling errors.

Dare

Great story! Hope there’s more!

This definitely should go towards a romantic direction in a second part. Both characters are experiencing a bit of self-discovery. Please make this a two-part series.

Disappointing

I am really hoping you continue this. Thanks

Very enjoyable read! I love the plot. Hopefully you continue this with many more chapters.

Somewhat needs a chapter 2 due to the lack of character depth.

4/5. Should be a 3/5, but, women with huge dicks (especially the BBC kind) nailing a twink happens to be my weakness. So, have a free point.

Way too fucking rapey

I kind of agree. In real life totally not ok. Also, there is hardly ever anything about safe sex in my stories. And that is because these are total fiction. Fantasies where exaggeration is used in order to create an impact and laws of common sense are not necessarily applicable. So kids - don't try this at home.