All Comments on 'Two Worlds Ch. 03'

by EgyptsGoddess

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jazz1190jazz1190about 12 years ago

That off the chain. He is in love with two woman and everyone know about but her!!! The next chapter will be krazy!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Great but ...

Your writing is good and the plot is interesting, but your chapters are not long enough!

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