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Anonymousabout 12 years agoGreat but ...
Your writing is good and the plot is interesting, but your chapters are not long enough!
jazz1190about 12 years agoThat off the chain. He is in love with two woman and everyone know about but her!!! The next chapter will be krazy!!!
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