All Comments on 'Two Worlds: Land of Ice Ch. 04'

I would be very sad if you did not continue to write this story. Despite the fact I am sad for the Neco's I want to see how it all works out for all the different groups. Your story is very captivating. Please keep it coming.

more please

An awesome unique story. Loving this so far. =)

Sad what happened to the nekos. Can't wait to read more.

The more I read it the more I love this story.

I am very glad that you are continuing the story. There is great potential here.

Finally, something good. Still very messy though, too many groups. First, Humans, then Nekos, then Werewolves, then, Yetis/Abominable Snowmen. I have had a horrible time getting the names to match. Unlike the first series, I know who is who, and belongs to which group. This story, I didn't know who Nate was until I got the hint he was the Alpha. Author, you should make the characters instantly obvious to the reader. No doubt you have had trouble writing it yourself.

I love you and I hate you... need more