All Comments on 'Two Worlds: Land of Ice Ch. 09'

by vixenfurry

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Zodia195Zodia195over 10 years ago

Nice this ending was better than the last one, but I really am dying inside about our main girl being separated from her mate. *Sighs* I hope he survives this one!!!

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 10 years ago
Oh yeah!

Looks like help arrived just in time. I love the way that a were wolf already found his mate among them. I wonder what kind of children they will have? I know that you are busy with the other story, but please write fast!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Original work

I want to thank you for your original idea's that have come to life thru your word(voice)

Everyone one is taught as a child that what you say and do will soon be forgotten, but what you write leaves the world a better place. I love this story and the former story two worlds just wet my appetite Kudos for original work and a great tale of love, woe and human faults

Toxicity23Toxicity23over 10 years ago
This story...

... leaves me breathless. I shall be waiting very patiently until you publish the next one.

ZgodbiceZgodbiceover 10 years ago
Please submit more

I'll be waiting for the next part. It would be fun if some high government official finds his/her mate... I hope for happy end for Charles (the lawyer)

Thank you.

jigglipuffjigglipuffover 10 years ago
Dang it!

Gosh I really want to read more! Please write it fast so we don't have to wait long!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
sad but beautiful

Loved it and hope the next one comes soon and is as great as all the others but (hehe) hopefully there is more sex and intimacy then before

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
thank you please post

I am truly enjoying your story, It is pulling together but more please more

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