All Comments on 'UCLA to Big D Ch. 13'

Love your work FA! Jenna on the Sybian was hot!

This might be my favorite chapter yet...I don't want it to end anytime soon!

Thanks FifthEstate for another entry. With as much mention of pollinating and fertilization in this chapter, I was almost expecting Jenna to be knocked up. Part of her appeal is how amazing she looks, I can only imagine the situations in which she's pregnant and even more desirable. Any chance you're going that route?

I agree with the previous poster- as much hard sex Jenna is getting from Cole without protection, surely she will be turned into a breeding mule by now.

Breeding Jenna was certainly Cole’s plan from the beginning, but you’ll have to wait and see! Don’t forget she and Ryan have been trying for years...

You really set the scene up in this one. Thanks for your reply, keeping me on the edge of my seat!

Damn dude, loved every second of this one! It was a two towel chapter. Keep that shit up!

Love the way you weave pop culture and musical references into your stories. A Clockwork Orange is one of my favorite movies, fucking brilliant how you tied it into the cops' humiliation of that hot blonde! Can't wait for more...

PLEASE don't leave us hanging for long!! LOVE LOVE LOVE this story & all the twists & turns! I can't wait to find out what Cole will do when he sees what the prick cop Jones did to Jenna!!!

Loved this!!! This continues to be one of my favorite stories on Literotica. Every chapter is worth reading...over and over! Which I have! Can't wait for the next one!

Each chapter is better than the last. Love Jenna’s transformation to a sexed up coke whore with nipple piercings and braids. Hope the transformation progresses and can read about Ryan’s reaction when he “reunites” with her. Awesome writing!

Awesome. Keep going.

Great series! I hope it never ends