All Comments on 'Uncle Buck Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I like it

I like how it is going. Keep up the good work and thanks for your time and imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
I suspect autocorrect did you in.

"An Amish family's mare was birthing and the foul was breech."

Foal is a young horse, one breach would be a foul Foal.

Foul Fowl, would be angry swans chasing you down the lane - getting closer by the minute.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Good story but.

As indicated below, you really need an editor.

The plural of "drag" is "dragged".

"Drug" is the euphemism for a chemical intoxicant.

Thanks for the effort though.

PapaMikePapaMikeover 5 years ago
Great story.

To Anony, it's a breech birth, not breach, and yes it's foul if the foal doesn't survive.

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 5 years ago
Nice story

Enjoying the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Wait. What?

OK. So Audrey is 48. She has been a widow for five years. Before that, she was married for almost 30 years. So she got married when she was 13?

racfguyracfguyalmost 4 years ago
What is the problem?

Kendra is sure being a bitch. Glad Audrey 'explained' to her.

KingCuddleKingCuddleabout 3 years ago

Still loving the characters and story.

"foul"? or FOAL?

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