All Comments on 'Uncle Jay Ch. 02'

I am definitely intrigued by the suspense. I was waiting for Uncle Jay to give Lita a sinister, sexual grin after mildly chastising her for the abrupt kiss. Truly, I hate suspense, but, ache for the continuation!! Please, give me more, I explore you!!!!

Barely setting the stage for what is to follow.

Carry on, write YOUR words and draw us further into your maturing with your uncle.

This is a one part story so far delivered in pieces that are far too small.