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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Good story

The change of person from 1st to 2nd confused a bit

jimhere22jimhere22almost 4 years agoAuthor

Yes, I originally wrote it in the 1st person, but changed after the fact, and I missed one "your-->her" change. Sorry.

goatman96goatman964 days ago

These one-page chapters or stories just don't fly. A good story needs, among other things, continuity and should be at the least 3 pages long.

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