All Comments on 'Under Her Breath'

Now I have to go read the first. A very nice story, thank you for it.

"Too out of breath to kiss, they hugged hard, a jumble of breasts, bedclothes, twined legs, hands in hair, hands on slick skin. Shaky with delight and joy."

So very real, so very lovely. It's been joy and delight to help Stickygirl write her passion. My role is to flit like a sparrow on commas and pauses; Stickygirl does the loving bits without any help :).

Very perceptive indeed, a great story.

I started with this this morning, then binged them all including ending here again! So nice. Will there be another? or is this just a lovely open end?

So then.

This is an amazing piece!

Your skill with words paints such a picture it's just amazing. As the two were in bed and finding each other, I was almost holding my breath while reading it. Thanks for posting and another thank you to the two authors that helped with the editing. Five stars.