All Comments on 'Under Mom's Bed - Confession'

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooalmost 4 years ago
Masterfully crafted segue of events

Captures the true beauty that mother and son have for each other. Unfortunately very few have natural occurring circumstances that bring them together like this.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

How many parts will be written in near future

And please continue your great work and write a lengthy story to reader interest

Damian35711Damian35711almost 4 years ago
This is really powerful.

I look forward to reading more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Fantabulous.

Making a story realistic makes all the difference.A mom lactating at 45 yrs seems little unbelievable.Also change from abrubt anger to mellowness.This story could have gone to great heights.The mom / son had a wonderful rapport in part one.

Definately good Indian story.

THANKS

nil_r2nil_r2almost 4 years ago
I am becoming you fan at your imagination

Wonderful! and the emotions that are expressed by the mother is making lactating t 45 utterly believable

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
What the hell did I just read

What the actual heck

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