All Comments on 'Under My Thumb Ch. 01'

A very good start indeed, please continue writing. Although I think your chapters could be a little longer, like around 2-3 pages. But, very well written and nice plot.. Cheers!

I want a PPS !

I thought this was amazing, well worth 5 *s; thank you - and more, please!

absolutely stirling story, as ever

such delicious horror.

like the time/sound vortex of nitrous oxide at the dentist, spiraling in to an echoey space the same but different every time.

Thanks for sharing your spark.

My names Molly too and your story really intrigued me. I found myself becoming one with this piece. I cant wait to read Ch 2 :D

I'm not sure why they put the "Chapter One" on this one...there's not a sequel. Sorry to anyone who was looking for one.

My name is also Molly, and I just turned 18. Your stories are wonderfully satisfying. I love your work.

what a fantastic idea well told and very well structured, had me being Molly :)

...If Molly can be programmed to be gay, does that imply that the Personal Permanent Servants are sometimes owned by other women?

MINDFUCK!

Second time reading this. Just as good as the first. I feel like this story is a fractal - apiece of a much larger whole.

The most intriguing stories I've ever read on Literotica, so glad I found this story. An excellent work of fiction, I think! Molly.