All Comments on 'Under My Thumb Ch. 01'

The most intriguing stories I've ever read on Literotica, so glad I found this story. An excellent work of fiction, I think! Molly.

Second time reading this. Just as good as the first. I feel like this story is a fractal - apiece of a much larger whole.

MINDFUCK!

...If Molly can be programmed to be gay, does that imply that the Personal Permanent Servants are sometimes owned by other women?

what a fantastic idea well told and very well structured, had me being Molly :)

My name is also Molly, and I just turned 18. Your stories are wonderfully satisfying. I love your work.

I'm not sure why they put the "Chapter One" on this one...there's not a sequel. Sorry to anyone who was looking for one.

My names Molly too and your story really intrigued me. I found myself becoming one with this piece. I cant wait to read Ch 2 :D

like the time/sound vortex of nitrous oxide at the dentist, spiraling in to an echoey space the same but different every time.

Thanks for sharing your spark.

such delicious horror.

absolutely stirling story, as ever

I thought this was amazing, well worth 5 *s; thank you - and more, please!

I want a PPS !

A very good start indeed, please continue writing. Although I think your chapters could be a little longer, like around 2-3 pages. But, very well written and nice plot.. Cheers!