All Comments on 'Under the Desert Moon'

Well-written, sensuous and sexy.

5 for sure.

This was an excellent tale/story. I rated it an Outstanding Read ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐. It had a great flow and just enough tension to keep it real. While I don’t really call it a cuckolding for Matt in my book. It is a perfect fit into the LW and/or group sex categories.

You seem to have knack for writing and creating vivid imagery through your words. I hope you keep posting here. Looking forward to consuming more of your offerings.

Keep Writing

JH4Fun

It was Matt’s own fault that he missed out, but the seeds for a bad ending have already been sown, as Rob liked fucking Beth, but didn’t like the idea of Matt fucking Anne.

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This was already written as Rob being better in bed than Matt.

Very sesual! Well written.

Well written and very erotic

While the premise was erotic (l loved the indulgence in edibles, for example) this badly needed a proofreading. The numerous errors were very distracting. Please keep writing, but please find yourself an editor.