All Comments on 'Under the Mistletoe'

by groberts45

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Unusual but...

Hot! That was certainly different, but smoking hot. Just about the only way to improve it would have been if Grace's sister had caught them, and fed her a mouthful of pussy. Again, quirky but hot. I'll be reading more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
My kind of Hallmark movie!

Well done!

JBEdwardsJBEdwardsover 4 years ago
I liked an aspect of it

At the beginning, I got kind of confused between Grace and Liz, and actually I kind of enjoyed the confusion, the blending of the movie with reality. What could have been merely a tacky story about a lonely, alcohol-dazed woman watching porn while diddling herself, became more in your hands. I don't know if that was what you were trying for, but whatever it was, I found it quite nice, and a good read. Five stars from me. -- JB

yarnspinnerryarnspinnerrover 4 years ago
Hallmark needs to make note of this

I guess it's not just me who rewrites those tacky Christmas movies in their mind! Lol

JJMemaw0623JJMemaw0623over 4 years ago
Now That’s. . .

the way a Hallmark movie should be!! It was a little ‘quick’ at the end though, still I loved it. Please keep writing, I loved it!!

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