by groberts45
Hot! That was certainly different, but smoking hot. Just about the only way to improve it would have been if Grace's sister had caught them, and fed her a mouthful of pussy. Again, quirky but hot. I'll be reading more from you.
At the beginning, I got kind of confused between Grace and Liz, and actually I kind of enjoyed the confusion, the blending of the movie with reality. What could have been merely a tacky story about a lonely, alcohol-dazed woman watching porn while diddling herself, became more in your hands. I don't know if that was what you were trying for, but whatever it was, I found it quite nice, and a good read. Five stars from me. -- JB
I guess it's not just me who rewrites those tacky Christmas movies in their mind! Lol
the way a Hallmark movie should be!! It was a little ‘quick’ at the end though, still I loved it. Please keep writing, I loved it!!