All Comments on 'Under Your Spell'

You really captured life for a single human being! Looking forward to reading more of your work!

What a nice surprise to find this new story notice today. I loved this. It was beautiful and tender and so very believable. You plucked the emotions so seemingly effortlessly and laid them bare for the world to share. I think this is some of your best work and I'm so glad you let us see the beautiful thoughts and feelings that are hidden away in you. Bravo!

Yukonnights said most of it for me. Just loved every sentence and paragraph, like a favorite romance novel. Very real and emotional. The sex got me very wet. Can't wait to read more.

xoxo,

Di

Exquisitely written and tastefully fine-tuned. It captures every nuance of an endless pain-equals-pleasure romance. Channeling Hannah is an excellent artistic move on your part. You've done well.

Thanks for expanding on Hannah's story, amazing piece of writing.