All Comments on 'Undercover Ch. 05'

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Anonymousover 17 years ago

HOT

Very, very hot. At last, Cade finally gets some satisfaction, only to have her running away from him. Please continue with the next chapter soon. I'm dying to read more of this series.

Anonymousabout 13 years ago

Brilliant

If only Industrial espionage was EVER this sexy. Hot story in every aspect. Like good tv your mind suspends reality. Hot sex scene, short compact. Well done. I'm only one third in!

SAV12 about 5 years ago

TIT FOR TAT

SHE GOT HER WISH, THE HARD WAY. REVENGE IS A DISH BEST SERVED COLD.

Anonymousalmost 3 years ago

If only she had that car that first day

fantasy57 almost 3 years ago

He gave her what she wants but she lost control of the situation and is now running away from the "control freak"when obviously she likes when he is in control and man handling her. Who is the control freak now?

Anonymousover 2 years ago

This chapter is a totally unrealistic anticlimax.

Both protagonists behaving way outside of their core values and past behaviours.

1 star from me.

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