by mattpantyhose
This was well written and an enjoyable read. Good job. I really liked the undercover detective angle, but had wished she needed to act more like a slit than be one. It would have been fun to have heard he inner monologue if she absolutely detested most of the sex, and then was pleasantly surprised by enjoying one or two encounters far too much. Having her be fine with a few acts and just like or love everything else actually, in retrospect, seems a bit unrealistic, although I bought it at the time. So, props for that. Yeah, though, I think a missed opportunity was not including an encounter where she was genuinely appalled, humiliated and/or disgusted, but is forced to smile and play-act through it. Gives me inspiration to write that one myself. Thanks for the thought provoking and well crafted story. Ciao