All Comments on 'Unexpected'

Like the story but you need to proof read it, it reads clumsily!!

How do you “accidentally ” commit a crime with a student? “Oh sorry officer. I was just minding my business she I decided to have sex with my student. Oh well, no harm no foul, right? Wait, what are you arresting me? Why am I going to jail? Why am I on the sex offender registry. Why am I divorced? Why am I sued?”

Yeah. That’s about how that’ll go.

When you self proclaim to be an alpha, you're not an alpha male....

Great start please keep giing

Yes good start nice to read a new story from a newbie just to let you know impregnating and pregnant stories are a big hit because even though this story will be classed as plain and boring because in this category they like BTB stories but don’t get me wrong impregnating and pregnant story’s are also a big hit because there are loads of readers who like to read pregnant stories just thought I’d put it out there ok

I hope you carry on with their story. Well written

I've only read this story a thousand times.

The premise is good but the execution is horrendous. Is English your primary language. I’m seriously asking because you really mess up a lot of thoughts.

Okay, proof read this, then finish the story.

It’s a picture copy of preposition by dukes hardcore honey comic

Guy's thank you for your support. I'm really happy that so many people supported a newbie like me. My first language is not English so I'm not good in writing English.

Also so many people commented about a work called dukes. It was completely a coincidence, I didn't knew about dukes until I saw your comments guys. Damn my work is really identical to it. If my work looks like a copy of dukes then I got nothing to say,

I hope there'll be further chapters.