All Comments on 'Unexpected Benefits of Car Pooling Pt. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
great twist

Good cliffhanger! Fun and hot story. Thanks for writing

AlmostMentorAlmostMentorabout 3 years agoAuthor

Dear Anonymous,

Thanks a lot for your kind words. Such appreciation certainly makes my day.

Cheers!!

Royse69Royse69about 3 years ago

wonderful

you add twists right at the right time, keeping it new. I was thinking for a sub Usha is awful manipulative. I do admit I didnt see the next twist coming. Cant wait to see what it is.

very good

Thank you

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