All Comments on 'Unexpected Encounter at Work'

Wonderful story! Especially so early in your Literotica experience. Keep up the good work!

Hot! This story is so hot. Thank you for writing.

Please learn how to shorten paragraphs to keep the flow of story moving. Good luck.

Good premise.

But you need an editor/proofreader.

And whom are you trying to impress with fancy names of clothing? Not needed. Not useful.

She's wearing a dirndl. OK. Dirndls don't have suspenders.

The sex is too rushed. Needs a lot more details. Really not much with her breasts. Why? A little nipple playing is nice, but how about some dialog about them?

She's never been more than groped by a couple of pimply-faced teenage boys, but she has not even a bit of a qualm about opening her legs for him? And she gives a world-class blowjob right off the bat?

Three stars.

I wish I was George!

So short but sooooo sooo good xx