All Comments on 'Unexpected Power'

great story!

It was a great story and i hope u post the next chapter very very soon! I would love it if u story would be a bit longer! great writting and a really good idea! see u soon

Very nice. I can see this going in a fun direction, and especially like that the changes he makes don't seem to evaporate after awhile.

So far so good. I am looking to see where this tale takes us.