All Comments on 'Unexpected Turn of Events Ch. 20'

I'm glad you got your inspiration back., I can't wait for you to write the next chapter. you had me hooked from the very first chapter and i can't wait to see what you have in store for Angel snd Cullin and Izzy and Owen? who is the mastermind ?

You have been missed! ... hugs to your sister for the pestering! I am so glad you found the inspiration again, we adore your stories & cant get enough of your writing. Cant wait for your next submission.. Again Welcome Back yayyyy!!

Love this story. I've re-read the first 19 chapters a few times while waiting for you to post a new chapter. You didn't disappoint! :) Hope you keep your muse happy and continue to post!

Tell your sister "Thank You" for not only being a muse but also for riding your butt to get this chapter out. And let us not forget that you are you are still a student, explains the spring break.

I liked this chapter for the simple fact that it seemed to touch base w/everything that is currently happening w/your story. We were reminded that Angel is pregnant, that Izzy was taken on the same day she was to mate Owen, and of course that a threat exsists. It was enough to keep the story fresh in my mind. Now for the next chapter I expect????.

good things come to those who wait! I loved this chapter and cannot wait to see how it all goes down in the next!

It was a wonderful chapter and I am looking forward to the next. I have a feeling the remote cabin will not be as empty as they think it is when they get there.

I believe that Glynis is behind the kidnapping, but I don't know her reason. I can't wait to find out!

Yup, Keep them coming! If you do not submit another story soon I'll be pestering you some more and annoying it--it's part of my job :)

So this was another good chapter and send out the next one like...now? :)

I have at least four suspects including Glynis, the old saying keep your friends close but keep your enemy closer comes to mind.

When Cullen and Angel know that someone is trying to harm her, WHY did she create a routine? It's like handing the villain a list of her goings and allowing him to choose the most convenient time to plan the kidnapping. And OH! Would you look at that? Angel gave the villain the perfect opportunity: a horseback ride at night, all ALONE. Are you serious?! Why would they let her go alone?! So much for Cullen's security.

And twin or not, wolves have the ability to scent. Each person has a distinct scent and since Angel is the Alpha Bitch, I'm pretty sure the kidnappers would know her scent. This is ridiculous. You can't just turn on and turn off the use of a wolf's scent. It was conveniently used when Cullen scented the intruders but the kidnappers somehow don't have that ability?

I hope you revise this entire story. I don't know if you're waiting to finish it all and then do it, but please revise it. It desperately needs revision.

Um twst you should really think before you post. Reread and then wonder to yourself how you can know a scent if you have never seen the person before? Then ask yourself how else I can poke holes in your comment.

Cullen seems to think that his bond to Ang will work when she is in the cabin even at that distance YET he didn't hear her when the stable was on fire. Why? Not to mention that his betas were supposed to be keeping watch on her and yet they couldn't find her in the library. Just sayin' God I love this story!!!! More!!!!

...............This will continue yes? It will? Good. *paces some more

................Not used to twitching to a awesome story of this magnitude....*paces some more*

...............Okay. I will wait. Understand about the college thing. I won't like it. Good luck either way.

*sits down in cage and mediates

When will more of the story be out. Please help us. Thanks sqherd

Reading the story almost made me feel like I was there. Keep the story coming.

BUT, the good news for all of YOU is that since I completed this chapter even before my spring break started—that means, I will be able to write a whole other chapter and hopefully have it posted very soon :) (and when I say very soon, I mean within the week, lol.)

WHAT HAPPENED TO WITHIN THE WEEK?

again! cullen i swear if you mistreat your mate one more time... i will slap you so hard your wolf will cringe!!! NO BE MEAN TO YOUR MATE.

girl your killin me with this story im starting to suspect everybody keep it up kay?

but im not kidding i remember how everybody used to bag out angel, when its cullen whos the dummy!!! made me so mad!!!! love this story!

came across your story and finished all 20 chapters in one sitting! i noticed that your writing skills have improved chapter by chapter and storyline really good. i hope you could send the next chapter soon. :)

great job!

awesome story cant wait for more

Alright... I know what I promised and I have kept my word. I did write the next chapter, but my editor is going through a little 'family situations' right now. So being respectful and understanding, I am being patient and waiting for her. So I am asking all of you to be patient please.

Also, I since I have chapter 21 is already written (just waiting), I will be starting to write chapter 22 as well---Im just asking again for you all to be patient because I have a lot of projects and last minute papers---I have my finals at the end of this month. :) Wish me luck!

I have read this story in one day!!!! Being a teacher I know I should be in bed now, but I could not stop reading it....Please hurry with the next chapters I will be waiting, waiting and waiting!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I hate waiting... grrr but I understand respect... can't wait for more!!!!

MORE... Lol... Loving this story, glad to see your writing improved from the first few chapters. Keep up the good work.

he es tado to el dia leyendo y ver que no hay mas me pone mal DX quiero saber que pasa por favor saca el proximo capitulo pronto grax ^^)

just reread the entire story.. cant wait to find out what happens next

en serio quiero saber que pasa!! >.< AHH muro de la curiosidad!

Needs more critiquing by your editors before posting. Good connection of the characters. Post more.

This is great stuff, but the next chapter was suppose to be out by now. What wrong? I love this story.

I'm really enjoying the story so far, and finally just got caught up. I hope that all is well and that you'll be able to have another chapter posted soon.

You really really need to make the next one i want to know what happens to Isobelle and who the bitch who took her is

Hey,loving the story. Why the long long wait between chapters?

Hey, loving the story, just curious when chapter 21 is coming out? Want to know what happens. Please bring chapter 21 out soon

I read for four hours, now I want to know what happens next!!

Can't wait for the next update. =)

I am hoping you come out with another few chapters soon. This story is great!!!!

I love the plot and the story. Lets just get that out now. It's got some great ideas :)

....but it's also got some holes.

1. Earlier in the series angel named the horses gaelic names, Cullen wondered about this. Gaelic is also added at times when Cullen speaks to her of love. This has not been explained but appears to be added as a filler

2. Angel turned earlier than the full moon, surprising Cullen and his betas, this is outside the norm for humans turning. It's also a loose end that hangs there. She was also powerful physically before she even got bitten ( punching Lydia the first time in the garden), question for the future is Isobel going to turn earlier as well (twins)?

3. Cullen is a complete idiot at times verging on bipolar behaviour. Something that does not fit with the alpha image you try to portray at times.

I would recommend a editor that is able to address both the plot issues and the grammer/spelling aesthetics of the story. Your editor at the moment is a proofreader. You have come a long way but have seemed to reach a platou in your ability, you should always be looking at improving, pushing the story just a little bit further, which i know you can do. there is a difference in leaving room for a sequel and assumptions and having plot holes. Please don't have plot holes :)

Looking forward to the next chapter, and seeing improvement.

<3 Pandora

Are you out there? We miss you! Please don't worry too much about the previous anon comment. He can't spell!

Next chapter please!!!!

Continue to write. I just read your story for the first time. I have watched you transform before my eyes from a talented vision with little guidance, to the makings of a well formed future writer. Please, continue, do not give up on the birthing process you are taking with this story.

Please do not give up on this story either. It too has taken a journey and is itself being birthed. Do not leave it hanging, please. Then when you have finished the story, and this step of the journey, rewrite it from the beginning with all that you have gained in the process. You will find a wonderful story will have become a truly remarkable book. :)

love the story, BUT its been that long since last update. i know you don't want to tell us when next chapter is coming, but do you really have to keep us waiting so long for the next chapter? seriously you could have given us 4-5 more chapters in that time period. i really like the story, and i don't want to loose interest in it, but will do if we wait much longer.

I love the story but I want to knw what happen next can you at least tell us if your working on it....

This has been such a pleasure to read I'm craving the next chapter please post soon.

Any update on when we can expect Chapter 21 its been soooo long since the last one. Hurry please.

wheres the next chapter? man dont leave me hanging so good need more

Good but sooo predictable.........

It's getting to the point where I don't know why I even bother checking if there any updates anymore. I really and truly enjoyed this story. :( :(

Please can we have more

Anyone know if bad_girl69 is ok? God forbid that she's not, but it's weird that she said she would post the next chapter in the next week and that was back in March of 2012! On top of that, she also said that her sister was anxious to read how the story ends... Weird... You'd think her sister would still be nagging her to finish.

bad_girl69 I hope you are well !!!

I love your story and wish I could read it to the end!

Nicole

And still waiting

well, fellow readers, i nominate bad_girl69 as missing. what a joke! will we ever get chapter 21? will we get more terrible writing? WHO CARES??

"unexpected turn of events" ... yep, sure is. most of us didn't see this coming.

Seems to be that we are still waiting and will be waiting quite a while longer. Don't know why it surprises me any more.

And contact them to find out what's up ?

03/16/12 when this chapter posted to 02/15/2013 and still no sign of the next chapter that's a long time to try and be patient even for your most loyal fans!

Glad I've started going to the very end of a series comment section to find out if the series ever got finished before reading ^.^

No matter what, I read your story from beginning to end once a week.

You are a wonderful and talented writer.

I am looking forward to you finishing this beautiful and entertaining story.

5 stars everytime.

Waiting patiently for you........

Loving Fan.... :-)

Either the author has: been in an accident and in a coma, or major writers block and just not telling us, or just plain old forgotten the story. I really and truly enjoy this story a lot, but the waiting is getting a bit much. I can understand if there was an accident or writers block, can't she just tell us what's happening please.just want to know if this is the end and I must delete or will there be more?

There is only so much torture one can take .I have to say I admire your efforts but I don't see you as a writer.Your plot was all over the place .Your grammar was horrendous .Your Alpha simply wasn't and your heroine acted like an inconsistent ten year old .Sorry

Why must you kill us with a drop like that? Pleas write more!

I was hoping for the wrap up where Isobel gets pregnant . We find out about the babies and that the kidnappers are dealt with and the unfolding of the rest of the story. Please be one of these authors that actually finish what you started. As mention not too bad for your first attempt in writing I have found your book very entertaining and love the humor from Gavin and Owen and how you brought the wolfs/mates together the sex scenes was really great it has has been a most enjoyable story so far. Now the closure awaits us. Email us back so we know whenbthe next chapter is out.

I need to know what happens, please finish this story

Well if the author will not finish this story, will you give story rights to another so he or she can improve on and finish this story? Such a shame to see it go to waste!

I don't know if u noticed... But it's been a year.

Way to not finish the damn story... It is sad when authors create epic stories only to leave their readers hanging...shame on you Bad_Girl69

Of keeping this story in favourite section if the author is not going to finish it? Its been over 16 months now that we have been waiting. Don't know if I should keep the story in my favourites pile or just delete. Wish the author would make up her mind and finish it or just tell the fans she isn't finishing it.

finish this story it is epic one and i REALY want to see how it ends

I think it's safe to say that the author can be classed as M.I.A now or their mind has been K.I.A

THAT REALLY SUCKS!!!!and since it been way over a year i guess the quick posting of the next chapter is not happening....and unfinished stories seem to be the norm on here anymore,,what a waste of time,,readers and writers,,,Its nice to look forward to new chapters but,would much rather have a finished one posted all at one time,and read as i want,,,and not get hung up and then let down by unfinished stories.

I love this story!! i am just so hoping that you will be working on the next chapter and not forgetting us, cause you are a great writer and this story is just so GREAT! Please post the rest of this story! :)

Come on .......... 😫

I totally forgot about this story and landed on it accidently this morning; I remembered how funny it was. So, what happened to you bad__girl; are you not going to finish this story? Wasn't there other stories listed under your name on this website? What is going on with you authors not completing these good stories; sad.

I love this story so much, so can you please finish it? I realy want to see what happens!!!! Post it as soon as possible!!!

Guess you didn't find your muse; huh?

When are you going to finish this story it is so great.

:-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-) :-)

It's the last chapter! You can do it!! I found your story a few days ago and couldnt put it down! Please finish it your almost done! Who is it? Whats going to happen? Why can angel change so fast?? There's still so many questions! You've got me by the balls and wont let go!!!

I came across this story and was so thrilled to see an indepth story. But now I've come to the end of this chapter and I'm bummed not to see the next installment. I hope to see the next chapter very soon.

So it is now September 2014 and still waiting for the chapter that you said would only be a weak away that was back in 2012 so much for your promises!

Glynis...well that is my guess

still waiting for the next chapter?

Are you still with US?

Are you still a member?

Well, I don't think she's coming back to finish this story; it's a shame. It was a really good book.

wonder if she forgot her password to sign in lol

Aaahhh, please finish.

I wish they would mark unfinished stories so I wouldn't start it to begin with.

16/03/12 when this chapter posted it is now 28/11/15 and still nothing!! I got sick of checking weekly years ago for your updates and started checking once a year!

So sad when a fantastic tale goes unfinished.

Please finish!

You left to much unfinished!! We need answers to to many questions!!

I was so sad this story wasn't finished.

It saddens me that the story is left unfinished. This happens all to often. I hope it is just really long writers block and nothing serious or negative that has caused this. If you can find it in you, please finish the story.

One more chapter and an epilogue would have made it a really good read. My guess: Glynis is the insider- wants to be alpha bitch with Lysander / Angel and crew are headed for the hide-out where she will win the day and retrieve Isobel and all will live happily ever-after. Hey it's a romance. PN

Please could you finish off the story with what's happening to angel cullen and the rest of the gang pretty please

I remember reading this story some years ago and I would swear that it had been completed. I remember who the traitor turned out to be and what her motives were and that Angle saves her sister who was being held in the cabin that Angle was going to hide out in. Where, oh where has that last chapter gone?

I’m not sure if English is your primary language. Hopefully, it’s not. An editor would be helpful in the following areas.

1. Maintaining a consistent point of view

2. Maintaining consistent verb tenses.

3. Character development.

4. Timeline details.

5. Reasonable dialogue.

6. General grammar.

THIS IS THE THIRD TIME I'VE READ THIS STORY AND IT JUST GETS BETTER EACH TIME.

I just read all of that and you mean to tell me there is no ending?!!

THE 4TH TIME I READ THIS AND IT JUST KEEPS GETTING BETTER. FINISH IT!