All Comments on 'Unexpected Visitor'

Tempo was fast. Why he'd grab her Waste (trash) instead of her waist is beyond me, pleas have someone besides yourself re-read your stories before you publish.

Shut up anon

Yes shut up Anon. "Pleas get someone...."?

Great story but it needs a bit of work. At the beginning you state that she still got a ticket. At the end she comments on getting away with a warning. Unless she got pulled over twice that day it doesn't make sense.

great story...keep on writing please and I hope there is a part two to this story!!!!!