by jessfantasies
great story...keep on writing please and I hope there is a part two to this story!!!!!
Great story but it needs a bit of work. At the beginning you state that she still got a ticket. At the end she comments on getting away with a warning. Unless she got pulled over twice that day it doesn't make sense.
Tempo was fast. Why he'd grab her Waste (trash) instead of her waist is beyond me, pleas have someone besides yourself re-read your stories before you publish.