All Comments on 'Unfaithful Couple'

Next part only after you have learnt to write proper grammatically correct English please.

"I'm here with the series of new story"

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No chapter # in the title to warn this wasn't a complete story BEFORE opening it always earns an automatic rating of 1.

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Also, you made a choice to write in English. English uses quotation marks. Learn how to use them.

The story was marred by the fact that English is not your first language and therefore made it a difficult read.

Get yourself an English editor of proof reader to appraise your story before submition. Then comments will be about the story content and not about the grammar.