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RatikaRatikaabout 2 years ago

You need to improve your English, your style of presentation of a story and increase your vocabulary.

desiboy75desiboy75about 2 years agoAuthor

Thank you for your comments. In the following narrative, I'll aim to enhance my English and presenting abilities. So please take the time to read my following story. I'm going to upload it today. I'm hoping to make less grammatical mistakes.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Pretty idiotic story. Aruna

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