All Comments on 'Universal Remote'

While your science basis was lacking, a little more fabricated mumbo-jumbo wouldn't be so bad, and it has a great beginning, but a continuation of the story would be great. I'd say since you are just beginning to enter the "Mind Control" section, spend a good portion of your time on your beginning and on the plot, and it should flow from there. Great Mind Control stories are few and far between, and if you continue with other stories as good as this one has begun, you've got a hell of a future ahead of you.

I lke the fact that their personalities were not changed...they were simply eager for some action. Nice! As the previous poster stated, a little more scientific mumbo jumbo and some viagra and you have yourself a winner!

I'd like to see this story expanded.

"As I began mentally selling my billions, though, I realized that the FDA would never allow this product to be sold, and that most likely I'd have to do testing on my own."

What the hell would the FDA have to do with it? This is a piece of machinery. They would have NO say about it whatsoever.

er, because the FDA is responsible for approving medical devices? And devices that emit radiation?

Good story - would like to see more!

The guy said from the jump he did not know much about the subject. Obviously this is a fantasy of his and he wanted to share it with Literotica readers. And his observation was right in the fact that maybe not the FDA but another government acronym would put a stop to what he was doing and when you think of the kind of work the guy was in, it only made sense for him to naturally assume that any testing that would invovle humans would be controlled by the FDA. Also i think he is right because the FDA controls any substance that involves a chemical reaction. If you affect the brain in anyway especially with radiation it causes a CHEMICAL reaction which would fall under FDA supervision. GREAT STORY

Nice! Curious to see what he does with it.

I really enjoyed reading this please write another.

First time reader long time follower if you write the other chapters

Further ideas:

Microminiaturization allows him to put the radio emitter in a wristwatch and leave it running at a low level.

Women begin to notice him, unconsciously drawn to his new “aura”.

He quickly builds a harem of women quite willing to share.

Life is good.

Unfortunately, another researcher copies his invention and sells it to a wealthy Pimp.

He uses it to abduct women into prostitution, by placing radio emitters in slave collars.

After that, they’re helpless and obedient captives, addicted to the constant brain stimulation.

Unfortunately, one of the women kidnapped this way was the daughter of a Mob Boss.

He wipes out the Pimp, and goes looking for the inventor of the device.

After spending three weeks in a cell, the MC is dragged before the Mob Boss.

His Techs lock a metal collar around the man’s neck, and inform him that they’ve retuned the collar.

It works on men now.

They switch it on and lock him in his cell, alone.