All Comments on 'University Years Ch. 08'

Truly wonderful, nicely done and inspired, but sadly not well-edited. A good editing would significantly enhance the value of the work done.

p.s. This most DEFINITELY needs to be extended as a series! You've gotten the readers' buy-in and now we're anxiously hoping for each installment!

This is perhaps the best chapter yet in this outstanding romantic/adventure series, marvelous storytelling from start to finish, with great writing, great characters, and a plot that holds the attention of the reader from start to finish. Five Stars.