All Comments on 'Unlocking My Inner Anal Slut Ch. 02'

You need an Editor very badly. For example in the tub: ride me like the little where you are. Or where he's licking and Biting her neck? Why is biting spelled with a capital B? I'm not an English major by a long shot but stuff like that ruined an otherwise mediocre story.

Sadly, Anonymous below, is missing the forest because of a few trees. This is a great little storyline, and I love this dirty anal slut. Swallowing cum, then piss is a great combo!!! And the line “I love Jake’s controlling side, but he knows not to take it too far. That’s rare in a man”, is fucking sooo true. And I’m a man!! Excellent work Anal_lassie19

Strappy is wrong, anonymous is right.

Get an editor.