All Comments on 'Unraveling the Librarian'

This was a very good first submission. I liked the interplay berween the characters. Keep writing!

Hi Cheri. A great story which l persisted with and got in to it and enjoyed it, look forward to the next thank you. X

You had me at "good girl." Love the way these characters interact!

Taking an advantage of someone in a vulnerable situation is not ok, but then again, that's what these stories are for. To let us forget about the RL rules for a while.

Thanks for sharing.

I really enjoyed this story. I can relate to Eva and loved how you used the story to develop both characters!