All Comments on 'Unscheduled Meeting'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Try rewriting without using the word "as"

AileyInnAileyInnover 1 year ago

Great story! Thanks.

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Male in my late 30's who has a particular weakness for curvy women with dark hair and light eyes. I like to try and write stories that are half from my dirty mind and half from the heart. Hope you enjoy them and please let me know if you do!

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