All Comments on 'Unspoken'

The sweet, sweet mating dance of the masochist and the sadist. How beautiful they have found each other. Gil's pov has a sense of detachment that tells the story well.

*fans face* oh my

Yes, this is real BDSM.

Raw and wildly beautiful..

More, not just make her cum.

More, like put out that smoke and kiss her. Hell, put it out on her of you like!

Too good build up, thank you.

There are many other ideas and dreams for you two to share. Have fun!

You *nearly* lost me in the first para. Not because "get the fuck out of my sight" or making her bleed or anything...

... but because lake ontario has no tide. 😄

Glad I stuck with it. Amazing story.