All Comments on 'Unusual Body Parts Ch.01'

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dirtyparisiandirtyparisianabout 16 years ago
loved it and waiting for more unusual body parts

please keep it coming...

dirtyparisiandirtyparisianabout 16 years ago
now I have read on and it's quite something

wonderful imagination

OldManFromIowaOldManFromIowaabout 12 years ago
Humor and Satire?

This is a pretty good story, and there really are people out there who are just like John and Marsha. I think someone mis labeled this story as "HUMOR AND SATIRE"

This story is not humorous at all. It would be much better labled as "EROTIC" or perhaps "ROMANCE" and I think it should have it's category changed right away.

John and Marsha, in real life, might really have the grim reality that the story started out as portraying from them. Being laughed at, or worse, shunned, because as a woman you have three breasts or, as a man, you have two cocks is something that would hurt a great deal. We don't do this kind of humor with skin color.

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