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Good premise.
Needed to slow down the sex.
Needed more reticence regarding the progression of the sex.
Needed dialog about what she imagined/envisioned while she masturbated.
Needed him getting her to watch some porn together with him -- assuming she'd never watched porn before.
Needed some indication of her level of sexual experience/s. Was she a virgin? How far had she gone before.
Three stars.
Awesome story, I really enjoy the slow buildup and tension. I hope you continue with subsequent chapters!