All Comments on 'Urban Girl in a Village Ch. 07'

by rosh21

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
The best story so far

Easily the hottest story of series so far. Really hoping for the next story as soon as possible.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
its too hot

cummed lik hell - so tasty ur stories luv u hmmm ! lv u roshni be a slut

i lov d way u explain ! ur imagination n thinkng capabalities ur so hard and i was checkng ur profile waitng to it becom 7 to 8 series : i thnk ill get adict to ur stories

naked without shame and daring is good bt too much is bad make her afraid of being naked r lik geting tens to caught tht wil cute also (any women gets afraid of nakedness r feels some fear ! also true nt with so aroused girl)

also mak hr taking risk lik daring herself like - whil anyone want to meet her fr any purpose n she makes herself concive n takes all hr clothes puts outside thr window r anythng or risking up herself to pack all cloths in locker n puts key in room near ppl workng ! even she wants she left ntg to cover her up

and dnt't rush directly to fuck r sex with workers tak few time

i like ur flow of stories it doest cuts r get error -scenes play in mind n does nt get cut or boring

also tie roshni herself naked wit key around hr neck r in the pussy

update nxt part soon

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Lack of sexual Tension while Reading it.

I felt this part lacks some sexual Tension that your other story has given in my mind. Though I see here that You have mentioned part 1. I am 100% sure that next would be a hott one and show the innocent and Slut side of Roshni.

I somehow feel that Roshni should not act like she is whore but a Girl who is always on mood to show her body, seduce frnds, villagers, relatives.

It would be good to make her blackmail by some guys, at same time make her dominant on few persons. This double game will help the reader to imagination.

But dont make her a True Whore,. Who is easy and ready to fuck all time. This will make this story just like Westerns or American script. And eventually loose Indian Theme of Being Taboo and yet artistic in Sex.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
ur awesome

do some activity in farms too ! i feel every person feelings in ur stories

be a slut like you are ! i thnk she should also care abt her reputatng and consequeces too bt whn becom horny she forgets everythng ! i lik hr to do fuckng n sometime 2 or 3 group ppl bt slowly becoming whore

Plz update next within march 3 r march 10

Let her grandparents too hear abt her things

N update regularly lov u roshu (as her grandmaa says)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great story

As a kiwi guy I've always been attracted to pretty indian girls. I have no idea why, but there it is. Pity more girls aren't like Roshni, seducing older guys like me.

Anyone who loves the story and wants to talk about it - justakiwibloke55@gmail.com

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
This was so hot!

Please just keep writing and continue this!

akivda8700akivda8700almost 4 years ago
Thank you so much for these

Really really loved it. Please do keep writing these.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Your stories are the best.

After Rupanita and urbanslut you are my new favourite. Keep writing more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
rosh update

updat fast rosh don't tak too long

just leave wishes or fantasy OF PPL N write how u like

i also commented requesting something bt i thnk u shld write how to proceed

AND BT DON'T U GO TO FORIEGN OR CITY BE IN VILAG N NEARBY VILAGE OR NEAR VILAGES OR AGAIN CLASSMATE ROOM EPISOD AND AGAIN dnt't TAKE MY SUGGESTNG WRITE HW TO WANT

update fast

ronylolronylolalmost 4 years ago

waiting for update

ZebraZadeZebraZadealmost 4 years ago
Write More

Please write more. You are a great writer. How do I know? I cummed multiple times and I wanted to fuck everything I saw...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
One of the best story series ever

Wow you are an amazing writer. Please write more in this series.

Waiting for updates

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Plz update

Too much time has overd

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Update

When will you post the updates?

You are such a good writer and many of us enjoyed this whole story of yours please post the next one quickly thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
I miss Roshni ...

please update Soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Miss u

Roshni try to continue story

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Need the next parts

Please never stop writing Rosh.. Continue as soon as possible..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Please come up with next part.. We are still waiting

GangstarsGangstarsabout 3 years ago

Updated next parts it's too late we r missing u rosh

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

We are still waiting for the next parts.. Please upload them

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

When will next part be out?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Amazing series. Please upload next part. Eagerly waiting.

rosh21rosh21almost 3 years agoAuthor

Hi, Everyone! Rosh here.

Thank you all for the immense and amazing response from all over the world.

It means a lot to me.

I am so sorry to make you waiting for each episode. I see your love (and lust) for me in every comment and mails I receive.

I'm here with a happy news. I have submitted a new chapter which will be published soon.

I really hope you guys like it.

Thanks a lot for your love and lust for me.

Love you all.

Keep cumming for your Rosh! <3

bottovarnisbottovarnisalmost 3 years ago

Very good! I enjoy your realistic detail.

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