All Comments on 'V is for Voyeur'

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cloacascloacasalmost 19 years ago
Nice reversal

And good, imaginative details. I wish more authors would understand the need to put imaginative effort into details. So many stories are just plot.

NikitaTheRebelNikitaTheRebelalmost 19 years ago
Very nice

I loved April's character, the way she thought things out and found a way to "get her M&M's and eat them too". Hot and messy! Just the way hot sex should be.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Shades of Mickey Spilane

Nice story, decent plot, but the twist could have been better. Say by making Greg a buddy of April's husband, but that's just a thought.

sybilrosesybilrosealmost 19 years ago
Now This one reminds me another Author From LIT

A little Drama lots of humor written in a Style just like a man whos intials are SM :)

Someone said Mickley Spillane I think I heard SG Joe Friday's Voice doing a narritive. Were you wearing a brown detective hat as you wrote this?

Your mind amazes me Darlin Good story!

Beam_of_liteBeam_of_litealmost 19 years ago
Forget the Candy

LMAO I would just like to watch!!!Oh hell just one please please?This is a hot story..yup I was rocking

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
what a stupid cunt

falling for that trick serves the cock hungry bastard right.....

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