All Comments on 'Vacation Awakening Pt. 02'

A truly horrible attempt at story telling. Where have all these awful writers come from lately? There have been a LOT of new authors posting in the LW section lately and they've been just ridiculously bad stories. Does no one proof read their stories and realize they're garbage? Look at all the stories that have rated less than 3 stars lately and you know what I mean.

No stars as even giving this trash one star would be an insult to the star.

These stories are just so awful. I’ve got to ask why are you even writing these really poor stories. There is nothing in these stories except the words loving wife that has anything really to with the loving wife category. This has got to be one of the stupidest part 2 stories written. And if you continue to be this stupid you are going to get thrown off this site because there are so many people on this site that like to read proper stories about interracial relationships. And you keep writing these stories you are just asking for trouble. So please just take a moment think about what you have written and just either get an editor or look at what you have written. These stories do not belong in the loving wife category. If you had put them in the interracial category you would probably have got a better response. So please do people a favour stop being big headed and just think.

Really not good. They would probably have aids and many more std's and die in agony like this story. Only 1 star - sorry.

A fairly close thing, but this tale is the worst I've read!

Zaire should give rebecca a parting gift-a black baby bump

After the rape in pt 1 was reported, I didn't waste time reading this

I take all stories as a fiction or fantasy, not seriously but I personally do not like t th he gay stuff. If it was his wife or other woman with their finger up his ass that would be fine for me but only that

My wife can't get enough rough sex. I think she would enjoy herself here. Watching me take some big cock up my hungry ass would be a big bonus for her.

Black men killing each other while competing for the chance to fuck white pussy?

Racist garbage.

Well I liked it, Black men dominating white males and fucking their wives.

I thought it quite original too.

And now I shall drink my Pepsi and wank myself.

What a broken human beings.

What a sad life.d

They all died of one of many STI's.