All Comments on 'Vacation Hypnosis - Day 01'

... if hypnosis in the real world worked this way, but it's fantasy and anything goes. Enjoyable romp though, if a little short.

4/5

Hope you plan on doing more. I know chapter 2 is out but this reads like a long story.

This hardly seems fair to Abigail, who appears to be a nice young lady, and Jay os just a self-centered asshole.