All Comments on 'Vacation Nightmare - Pt. 03'

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phreditophredito10 months agoAuthor

Still new at this. Horrified that I used "You're" instead of "Your" in an early paragraph. But an edit takes weeks to appear, so I am going to leave it as is and live with the shame. --the author

Qwer12Qwer1210 months ago

Entertaining and well developed story line. Keep rocking on this pair as they are toyed with. Cheers

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