All Comments on 'Vacation Twist Ch. 02'

ya loose, maybe you'll get to watch next time?

That started off great but ended up a bit sad for the husband i think. I wish he has more luck in your next story, maybe he'll get into bodybuilding as well and get something more out of it.

just dump her, she will never come back

But if your a wimp cockold little hubbie, what do you expect.

hubby get off the stick and go find another.do to her as she do to you.their women who want a good man.

CUCKY IS BACK IN TOWN--I had a sorry cheating ass wife--A goog Lawyer I scraped her bones. Now she is some dumb slut trying to make ends meet--She had it made with me, money car, etc. But the cheating doomed her.

I'm surprised he didn't cry himself to sleep. What he should have done is; with his feet on her slut ass, roughly push her slut ass out of bed and let her sleep on the floor.The next morning she would be told that she can find somewhere else to live, that he didn't want to associate with cum sucking slut whores. She might look sexy and hot but she's a nasty slut.......She has the taste of being slutty,and she will never be fit to be around his family anymore. Let her live in the gutter, where she belongs.

Your writing is proof that some people shouldn't learn to read or write.

In case anyone is wondering, yes, that was sarcastic.

Of talent and time, did you jack off writing this shit? If you did you were the only one.

Not worth reading. The husband needs to have his head read for allowing her to act like a total slut. Divorce the whore.

Who treats a loving husband like shit while she becomes a trashy slut!!!!

How awful and sad to write another one of these.

spiral with no end in sight. Just flush it and get it over with.

Whore and sluts arent loved they are used.

Great story line.

Obviously a lot of men have fantasies about their ladies being shared or taken with another man, but they're reluctant to do so because they envision something exactly like this happening to them. And in real-life it often does. Keep the tale going--I look forward to your next installment. BTW--ignore all the haters who comment here--they do it to everyone, it's like a game to them and I've found that the best authors receive the most negative comments.

Looking forward to the next chapter....

she was changed and they just kept coming. there is a new woman who finds the past and its contents, just that. it included husband. the marriage has run its course and it will get no better for him, so end the misery.

It is nice to find a story in which one of the characters shows some sign of development, or change over time. I anticipate further development in the wife's character. But, you'd better check the meaning of "wreak." You might wreak havoc with a bottle, but if you drank all of it you'd reek.

She had found out he was not the best in bed, was not the best looking, and a total WACC. Not she hangs out with people (gals and guys) that have to much testosterone, hell she probably has been using some to help build up. No she has been already been planing on moving on but has yet drawn the bank accounts enough. But the sick author likes WACC stories so the hubby will hang in there as a whimpering play toy that everybody will laugh at.

Gonna find out now that I post this