All Comments on 'Vacation Vixen'

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percy9 months ago

At least he got some hot sex out of the deal!

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DanDraperDanDraper9 months ago

Great story, I loved that ending. Despite her motives, I do think she must've liked him enough to offer him sex to get what she wanted when she could've found other ways to get into his hotel room. At least he was happy about everything in the end. 5-stars.

Bargyn1Bargyn19 months ago

Nice twist at the end. Pheew!

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