All Comments on 'Vacation with My Aunt Pt. 05'

by zipzero

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DunkirkDunkirkalmost 4 years ago

Hopeful aunt holly will soon show off a baby bump

yourkinkylibrarianyourkinkylibrarianalmost 4 years ago
Wtf is wrong with char development?

The series SEEMED well written and the story was okay to read but wtf happend to the characters here? Starting in chapter 4 everyone is only talking about how big the nephew‘s cock is. I even forget the dude‘s name because he‘s only been mentioned as nephew when Holly wants his big cock since the beginning. Why is insulting and degrading his trademark, now? @zipzero: do you remember how the character behaved when it was still Chap1? Even he was arrogant for no reason he was a bit timid at least. - my mistake for reading this far, hoping it‘ll get better not worse.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

You really fucked up by having him abuse Taylor that shit is boarder line rape. Screwed up the whole story and is disgusting that he shows no remorse or guilt for what he done

SomeDamnedDudeSomeDamnedDudealmost 4 years ago
Downhill rapidly!!!

The continued abuse of Taylor is just too much! I will not read anymore of this series and I suggest no one else do so either! It is too bad as the story you started telling had such promise! I read the beginning of this part to see if James would redeem himself, NOPE, BYE!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Hope your aunt does get knocked up with your kid in her.like this story hope knocks up rest of his cousins too.mine started with my aunt Rachel and me having affair together that I ripped off her clothes then pushed her on to her bed then took mine off got on top of her and rammed her cunt hard she screamed and bottomed out in her started fucking her hard made her orgasm hard plus sametime cumming hard inside her she screamed pull out I said to late her mouth just dropped open said you may have just knocked me up with your kid in me.told that was my goal get you pregnant move in with me we are living together have 4 kids together

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Disgusting...

If I could give this story negative stars I would gladly do so. What the fuck is wrong with you? Stopped reading after chapter 4. You’re a sick fuck but then, of course, you know that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

A little too aggressive for me but super hot

Oatmeal1969Oatmeal19694 months ago

jumped the shark on chapter 4 to abuse and essentially rape, now I'm skimming to see if the family get revenge.

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