All Comments on 'Vacation with the Marshals Pt. 02'

This is great stuff. Hope you keep writing.

One of the best stories I’ve read here!

Please write More!

Wow. More please.

Hopefully this will be continued!

I love this story. I'm very much looking forward to more installments.

More of this story please. And please bring Cynthia back in to the mix!

looking forward to how it develops.

Thanks for the new installment! I will look forward to another chapter if/when you decide to write it.

This series is really nicely developed. Very good pacing and building of anticipation.

Things got wild on the first full day of vacation, didn't they? And are Cynthia and Rebecca et al really willing to invite the womenfolk from the next cabin? And will Sam live through it all?

I'm really looking forward to the next part of this story. Fantastic so far.

Great story!

Please continue !!!

Please continue

Fantastic, sexy, fun story. Very hot, too. Great job.

Please continue story. I hope Rebecca and Sam stay together

It should have been slower and teasing. Spiralled out too fast

Talk about fantasy’s coming true!

Hi, any plans to continue this story? I hope so :) Thanks for sharing!

Second reading, it is again a fun and entertaining story!

Cynthia is first down stairs. Wearing a long t-shirt as night wear.

She pulls off Sams blanket waking him and revealing morning wood.

So things got wild after i went to bed.

Um

Sam I heard Rebecca shout when she cam.

Um.

Anything else?

Melanie gave me a blow job.

So you fucked my youngest daughter and my eldest blew you. Nice. Not to mention the lap dance.

Sam wants to be ashamed but his position on the floor means he can see up Cynthias t shirt and she isnt wearing panties. His erction grows.

Looks like I'm behind the curve. Cynthia stands over Sam abd pulls her TShirt over her head. Revealing she is naked.

She first straddles Sams face riding him to her first orgasm. Then she moves down and rides his cock.

Her shout when she comes wakes the house. Rebecca is the first down stairs.

Or thats how I'd write it. Although I use spell check.

Great story, please keep going! There's at least 20 more chapters to go!

Should have had a final dare that everyone stay naked for the rest of the vacation.That would be a lead in for the next chapter where the neighbors could get involved.

More of the Marshals!!

If I may quote you; this story is "like all the fantasies I'd harbored since puberty began." I'd love to read about the rest of the vacation. After all, they're there for a full week aren't they? And this was only day #2. And I get the feeling that Sam would love to tit-fuck one of these girls.

His never-ending boner(s)/urge to have a tug/constant teasing is/was getting monotonous

Where does Cynthia and the briefly intro'd tall skinny neighbor down the beach fit in...?

Sam's excellent vacation continues! 🔥🔥🔥

Yes, Cynthia and the neighbors definitely still need to be addressed or undressed as the case maybbe! Another well thought out and written chapter. I look forward to reading the next. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

Spectacular. Infuckingcredible. I fear for this poor young man's health if Cindy and the neighbors join in.

Oh yeah, fill her mouth with big hot gobs of Sam jam. Shoot, I haven't jerked off this much in I don't know how long. Make me feel like a damn teen again. Such excellent stories! Can't wait for the neighbors to come and visit. But it could be the end of Sam as we know him.