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Click hereEither way, she couldn't help to feel sorry for the man that would leave a legacy of two children behind. He had only known about the first for a very short time and unfortunately, he would never know about his second.
The story itself was good, but it had been better with a proper editor, and the jumping between first and third person made it messy. 4 stars only, you can do better.
I have steered away from reading this and now wish I had read it sooner. Think the title is what kept me from reading it, but what a great story line. Thank you.
An unusual story, which was fascinating even without the sex scenes. 1st/3rd swap towards the end was confusing at first.
Bravo for the courage to try different approaches to story telling.
I too agree with UmmAight comments below and yes you had me in tears at the end…⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️