All Comments on 'Vale Ch. 02: Where There’s a Will'

I love Vale setting the girls up for him! Just wish John had more character/actions himself, hope he doesnt stay a silent dildo for long.

lol - a subject of much discussion between Scrappy & myself.

I didn’t want this to devolve into a standard Mind Control fantasy of absolute power. I liked the idea of the twins being seduced by money as much as sexual desire.

One of the problems with an “irresistible” cock, is it ends being the dictator in the story, that could be a literary cul-de-sac, I see Vale more as an enabler than a director, maybe with the occasional nudge to keep things interesting. Keep it going Alina, liking it so far!

I switched POV to Polly & Cassie to try and avoid the whole problem of dictatorial cock - although kicking the MC out of his own story is problematic in a way also (as noted by Weezyf here).

I Love woman who debase themselves but end up enjoying it. It's what I often write about as well.

No incest 4 stars