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All Comments on 'Valentine's Day Cupcakes'

by Quinn_McMullen

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Boyd PercyBoyd Percyabout 2 years ago

Great story! Begs for a follow up.

5

Galama88aGalama88aabout 2 years ago

Need longer form story

IcarusascendingIcarusascendingabout 2 years ago

I agree, theres more to this story. Great premise, just feels rushed

SouthernCrossfireSouthernCrossfireabout 2 years ago

Great job, Quinn, especially considering the 750 word constraint. You told the whole tale in very abbreviated form but the emotion was there on his part and hers at the end (though it would have been interesting to see how she came to the realization). 4.5*, rounded up.

Quinn_McMullenQuinn_McMullenabout 2 years agoAuthor

Limiting yourself to 750 words is tough. I cut out a lot and consolidated even more. I'll see what I can do about an extended story.

FaithfulToWifeFaithfulToWifeover 1 year ago

Always love stories where you are the last resort for the girl 😏

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A collaboration that Erin Page and I put together has been published. It combined her Virginia Beach stories and my Gabrielle story. Here is the link: https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=6246638&page=submissions I strongly recommend Erin's Virginia Beach st...